tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8474977779867097029.post8107695238936670337..comments2023-10-12T06:12:02.686-05:00Comments on Starting a Small Business Without Losing My Mind: First Full-Time Employee, and a Busy MondayBrian H. Gillhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13209697542675181894noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8474977779867097029.post-52542523402757264092011-10-07T10:21:59.198-05:002011-10-07T10:21:59.198-05:00Brigid,
Found, fixed, and thanks!
About the &quo...Brigid,<br /><br />Found, fixed, and thanks!<br /><br />About the "think the product is good ..."? Oh, <b><i>fancy</i></b> fudge! That's not what I meant.<br /><br />'Write in haste, repent at leisure.'<br /><br />Or, in this case, clarify. I've added the ideas that should have been there the first time.<br /><br />And, again, thanks!Brian H. Gillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13209697542675181894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8474977779867097029.post-49184382551699469992011-09-12T21:21:55.733-05:002011-09-12T21:21:55.733-05:00Extra space: "entrepreneur Aaron Mc Williams ...Extra space: "entrepreneur Aaron Mc Williams had"<br /><br />Extra word: "you start bringing the your prayer and the"<br /><br />There's also some perhaps unnecessary repetition in the second to last and last paragraphs of your Amazon blurb: "This creates a solid pillar candle.<br /><br />...As the spiraling wick burns, a pillar candle forms around your written intention"<br /><br />You think the product is good because he's family? "because he's family, I think the product is a good one."<br /><br />The Friendly Neighborhood ProofreaderBrigidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03796317915330760325noreply@blogger.com